Lovely, Andi. If I read it without the photo, I almost see the frog calls AS the first gold leaves (though I guess it would be a colon, then, not a semi-colon). Anyway, I love the way you've captured sound, texture/temperature, and sight in so few words.
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Gorgeous!
Nice one, Andromeda! Keep those haiku coming.
I love autumn, and this haiku captures the feeling of early morning walks ....
Lovely, Andi. If I read it without the photo, I almost see the frog calls AS the first gold leaves (though I guess it would be a colon, then, not a semi-colon). Anyway, I love the way you've captured sound, texture/temperature, and sight in so few words.
Lovely!
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