I've been inspired again by my Poetry Sisters - six amazing poet women who keep challenging each other to try new forms and test new poetic waters. Roundeau Redouble is a form I've never attempted before. It tremendously difficult! It sounds simple enough; six stanzas with a simple rhyme where stanzas two through six repeat a line from the first stanza. (
Kelly explains it better.) The key is to write a really kicking first stanza. That's where I spent most of my time struggling. I've been revising it right up to the last minute. But it's time to t publish! Click over to
Tanita Davis,
Kelly Fineman,
Sara Lewis Holmes, Laura Purdie Salas and
Liz Garton Scanlon's blogs to read their poems for the full effect. (Trisha is taking some time out on this round.) And stop by Danika at the
TeachingBooks.net for the Friday Poetry Round up. Enjoy your weekend - spring is coming!
A note about the flower pictured: snowdrops (
galanthus) are a late winter/early spring bulb that flower in February or March in my neighborhood. This year they were covered with snow until just recently, but i have some in my yard in bloom today. They are known to actually produce a heat in the growing tips of green, which melts the frozen ground and snow and ice in order for them to push out and grow. Amazing, don't you think?
Snowdrop's Fire
A bud's a precious hopeful thing.
A sword of tender heat cuts bones of snow;
drawn as the tide of mud screams "spring"!
Come weary children; shelter in its glow.
Ancient seed, defeat the cold and grow;
far spheres new circles start as petals fling
rough ice from raging fire drawn deep & low.
A bud's a precious hopeful thing
as bold as red that flashes on the wing.
Relentless though the winds still blow,
light's longer days each leaf will bring.
A sword of tender heat cuts bones of snow.
Do not despair, trust what the feathers know.
Slow shifting in the heavens; bright bells ring
announcing melting ice. Cracked crystals flow,
drawn as the tide of mud screams "spring"!
Come round this fire and jingle in its bling!
God's surging glory all their jangles show.
The blossoms' brazen throats in chorus sing.
Come weary children; shelter in it's glow.
Let's linger on the path, our footsteps slow -
reset our cadence to the snowdrop's swing
receive the blessing of this fragile row
to this wild hope our hungry hearts still cling.
Come weary children!
...........- Andromeda Jazmon