I love the photograph and your haiku--especially the "tipping sunshine" line. It sure doesn't seem like spring is on the way where I live yet--even though the temperature is rising, it still feels like winter here.
Thanks! Laura I was afraid I was using too much "poetic device" here... but I couldn't help myself. You know how it feels when the sun is so springtime hot it makes you drowsy? But you know it's just a fluke because it's really still calendar winter and the snow could come back tomorrow... The bees are drunk on it!
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Cloudscome,
I love the photograph and your haiku--especially the "tipping sunshine" line. It sure doesn't seem like spring is on the way where I live yet--even though the temperature is rising, it still feels like winter here.
"into their cups" love that...picturing bees who are buzzed!
and "tipping sunshine." Oh, this one is a real winner, Andi. It's amazing.
Thanks! Laura I was afraid I was using too much "poetic device" here... but I couldn't help myself. You know how it feels when the sun is so springtime hot it makes you drowsy? But you know it's just a fluke because it's really still calendar winter and the snow could come back tomorrow... The bees are drunk on it!
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