Red
leaf
turns
yellow,
leaving
branches
forlornly
bewildered.
Sacramental,
transforming,
autumn equinox.
Sanctification.
-----Andromeda Jazmon
leaf
turns
yellow,
leaving
branches
forlornly
bewildered.
Sacramental,
transforming,
autumn equinox.
Sanctification.
-----Andromeda Jazmon
Miss Rumphius has given us another challenging poetry stretch this week. She tells us about OULIPO, a group of mostly French writers and mathematicians creating new forms of poetry. The above poem is my first attempt at a Snowball poem, where each line is one letter longer than the previous one. Trisha gives two other examples of mathematical or pattern based poetry forms. Go try one for yourself!
4 comments:
I am impressed by your use of forms in your writing-- I may try some of that myself (if I get over my fear and the annoying editor/critic in my head).
Okay, I love this! I particularly like the physical shape the poem takes. I may try this constraint form for my poem!
There is an excellent article about OULIPO at http://geraldengland.co.uk/zz/z20.htm - The Number of Language by Steve Sneyd - well worth reading.
Loved this...I'd say you met the challenge!
Love,
D.
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