We're tumbling downhill
with no thought of ground below;
red-faced with laughter.
The prompt this week at One Deep Breath is adventure.
Tuesday, November 20, 2007
November 20 Haiku
We're tumbling downhill
with no thought of ground below;
red-faced with laughter.
The prompt this week at One Deep Breath is adventure.
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10 comments:
such joyful haiku of wild childhood abandon!
I really appreciate the joyful quality too. And, it's multi-layered -nice job. Love the photo.
I love your leafy adventure!
that sounds like fun! Wonderful red leaves too!
What fun! Adventure of the best kind!
wonderful haiku! brought a smile to my face.
I like the aspect of being in the moment that your haiku asks the reader to participate in. That is what a grand adventure is like . . . being present to the present moment!
Thank you all for your kind encouragement.
Wow! This took my breath away. I want to follow the leaves.
Your words and photo tell the story well. Keep up the good work.
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