a wrung sponge: October 17 Haiku

Wednesday, October 17, 2007

The old barn;
a collection of roof peaks
where shadows play.

Balance. The prompt by One Deep Breath Haiku

get zapped said...: Gorgeous play with image and words. I wanna play in the barn now ;); 10/17/2007 12:15 PM
D.Gaillard said...: brilliant illustration and words.; 10/17/2007 4:33 PM
Anonymous said...: I love "peaks" with "plays," since it gives me an echo meaning of peeks. Nice!; 10/17/2007 7:13 PM
Roswila said...: Very nice haiku. Like the photo, too.; 10/17/2007 7:40 PM
Tumblewords: said...: Beautiful image - love the contrast and the flowing words!; 10/18/2007 1:08 AM
Crafty Green Poet said...: I love the play of light and shade here; 10/18/2007 4:23 AM
qualcosa di bello said...: the geometry of your words & the photo are spectacular!; 10/18/2007 9:18 AM
Vivian Mahoney said...: I love reading your haiku. Thank you for sharing.; 10/18/2007 3:04 PM
Greggo said...: wonderful haiku! i love 'where shadows play'!; 10/19/2007 12:31 PM