Thursday, November 16, 2006

November 16 Haiku

sand box 2

sun breaks through clouds
left on the quiet playground;
castles in the sand

-Andromeda Jazmon, 2006

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angie said...

That's lovely. I think the word "quiet" is ironically the loudest, or most important, word in the poem. It's very hushed and transitional as the clouds move and the sand castles (inevitably) crumble.

PS - are you gluten-free? my 3-y.o. son is too!

LauraHinNJ said...

I LOVE that photo together with your haiku!