Wednesday, November 15, 2006

November 15 Haiku/Renga

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Rain, day after day.
Leaves pile up beside the door;
one cricket still sings

- Andromeda Jazmon, 2006

How is it that some songs are freshened,
not worn, with singing?

Shelley Krause added this lovely couplet, making this a Renga. Thanks Shelley! Anyone else want to add a stanza in the comments?

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rachel said...

This is exactly what has been happening around the entry ways of my home...lots of rain brings lots of leaves. I will not complain though...around here the snow will fly soon I'm sure.

Shelley said...

My pleasure, and thanks for the invitation...

But I WOULD like to buy a vowel. ;-)


Andromeda Jazmon said...

So sorry Shelley! Fixed now.