In 1948 Joyce Carol Thomas took the train from Oklahoma to California, when her father moved the family there to be near extended family. The author recals lovely, flavorful details of the excitement and wonder of the trip. Some of my favorite lines:
"Daddy says,
"If the lemons are big as oranges
if the oranges are big as grapefruits
if you bit into a strawberry
and taste heaven in your mouth
why, you're in California
the Land of Milk and Honey."
..."where ships sit
anchored in the coastal waters..."
"where the music swings
and every voice rings
with its own true sound..."
"Beyond the bay
mountains topped with ice cream snow
rise..."
Thomas employs sharp color words associated with wonderful tastes and smells to give readers sharp images that make those of us enduring a dreary northern winter long for southern California. If you are in need of some citrus and sunshine go find this book and drink it in!
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9 comments:
I definitely want to see this book now -- loved the excerpts you shared, especially the ice cream snow :).
Yup, that's a place I'd like to go! Love the excerpt you chose -- I'm write behind Jama in the line for ice cream snow. :)
It's beautiful, the way this poem sets up the tastes, visuals, smells of fruit first before we get to California.
I just watched our librarians create a bulletin board of many book covers for February. I'll be sure to tell them about this one too, Andi. It looks wonderful. Fun to hear about the F & G too.
Oh, I love this book! At first, I thought it was too "young" for my sixth graders, but then I used it as a mentor text for writing workshop (one of our make your writing juicy mini lessons) and they loved it too. The paintings are just glorious, as well.
Yes, I agree it would make a fabulous mentor text! And I think I neglected to say enough about how fabulous the artwork is... I would love to take the pages and make a bulletin board if I were still in an elementary school... great use for an F&G!
Having grown up in Southern California (Anaheim to be exact) I loved the orange groves that surrounded our elementary school and the strawberry field behind our house. Alas, it's not like that anymore, but makes for great memories. Thanks for sharing. =)
Can't wait to get my hands on this one!
Just lovely! What beautiful word pictures. I'll have to go find this one.
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