Tuesday, March 04, 2008

March 4 Haiku

march 3 012

forest floor thaws;
bees are into their cups
tipping sunshine

3 comments:

Elaine Magliaro said...

Cloudscome,

I love the photograph and your haiku--especially the "tipping sunshine" line. It sure doesn't seem like spring is on the way where I live yet--even though the temperature is rising, it still feels like winter here.

laurasalas said...

"into their cups" love that...picturing bees who are buzzed!

and "tipping sunshine." Oh, this one is a real winner, Andi. It's amazing.

Cloudscome said...

Thanks! Laura I was afraid I was using too much "poetic device" here... but I couldn't help myself. You know how it feels when the sun is so springtime hot it makes you drowsy? But you know it's just a fluke because it's really still calendar winter and the snow could come back tomorrow... The bees are drunk on it!