Tuesday, November 20, 2007

November 20 Haiku

laughing leaves

We're tumbling downhill
with no thought of ground below;
red-faced with laughter.

The prompt this week at One Deep Breath is adventure.

10 comments:

qualcosa di bello said...

such joyful haiku of wild childhood abandon!

christine said...

I really appreciate the joyful quality too. And, it's multi-layered -nice job. Love the photo.

coconutannies said...

I love your leafy adventure!

Crafty Green Poet said...

that sounds like fun! Wonderful red leaves too!

tumblewords said...

What fun! Adventure of the best kind!

Greggo said...

wonderful haiku! brought a smile to my face.

Glad said...

I like the aspect of being in the moment that your haiku asks the reader to participate in. That is what a grand adventure is like . . . being present to the present moment!

Cloudscome said...

Thank you all for your kind encouragement.

Daphne said...

Wow! This took my breath away. I want to follow the leaves.

Michelle Johnson said...

Your words and photo tell the story well. Keep up the good work.