Wednesday, November 14, 2007

November 14 Haiku

fading lines


trees together
leaning toward the fence;
the path to fog


The prompt this week at One Deep Breath is "belonging".

9 comments:

Nancy Bea said...

What an interesting photo! Almost surreal.

Glad said...

Trees have always been a source of special joy for me. The last line of your haiku sans the period moves me further into the photo.

coconutannies said...

Nicely done! Did you take the photo? Where was it taken?

Mom Unplugged said...

What a lovely haiku! And your photo is gorgeous. Personally, I love anything with rain and fog.

Cloudscome said...

Thanks for all the nice comments. Yes, I took the photo along the drive that I take every day. Yesterday was extremely foggy and I got several good shots. I have some more haiku brewing that involves fog...

qualcosa di bello said...

this is a beautiful metaphor for belonging & the photo is mystical!

LittleWing said...

how beautiful...the photo and ku fit so well..

spacedlaw said...

The photo is stunning. I Like the idea in the poem that the trees are moving as one.
Can't wait to read the foddy haiku. That's a great prompt. Have you send it to the moderators?

Crafty Green Poet said...

wonderful photo, and in combination with the haiku - very atmospheric indeed