Wednesday, October 17, 2007

October 17 Haiku

barn.JPG

The old barn;
a collection of roof peaks
where shadows play.


Balance. The prompt by One Deep Breath Haiku

9 comments:

get zapped said...

Gorgeous play with image and words. I wanna play in the barn now ;)

D.Gaillard said...

brilliant illustration and words.

laura salas said...

I love "peaks" with "plays," since it gives me an echo meaning of peeks. Nice!

Roswila said...

Very nice haiku. Like the photo, too.

tumblewords said...

Beautiful image - love the contrast and the flowing words!

Crafty Green Poet said...

I love the play of light and shade here

qualcosa di bello said...

the geometry of your words & the photo are spectacular!

HipWriterMama said...

I love reading your haiku. Thank you for sharing.

Greggo said...

wonderful haiku! i love 'where shadows play'!